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Post by Admin on Nov 14, 2014 14:53:25 GMT -8
Well, here we go. My first offering for peer editing. It's a 4 part story called Wyvern Rising. I am not really happy with the ttle so any suggestions are welcome. the Sky-War part 1.docx (18.67 KB) |
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luna
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Post by luna on Dec 4, 2014 17:02:51 GMT -8
I'll take a look at it this weekend. Finally have free time!
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Post by Admin on Dec 6, 2014 1:16:03 GMT -8
yay!
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Post by farangdiel on Dec 11, 2015 21:30:16 GMT -8
Quick edit for you: Page 2 line 12 "bath and groom" should be "bathe and groom."
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